Tuesday, August 10, 2010

The noose tightens

Dear friends, followers and #teasertuesday readers. Thank you all for the time you've spent reading D.T. Rhysing's story. He would be pleased. Many of you have expressed concern about Kaiulani and whether she'll make good her escape. Rather than leave you hanging I thought I'd post this chapter so you can learn a bit more about Abdul bin al Shar and see for yourselves the growing peril D.T. and his extended family face.


The Bones of the King - CHAPTER 80 - The noose tightens

Kaiulani entered the water cleanly and allowed her momentum to carry her deep. When she saw the bottom of the Saracen she tucked under the dark overhang, exhaled some air to reduce her buoyancy and swam for all she was worth. She didn’t waste time or energy turning over, choosing instead to use the vessel's bottom as a reference as she passed beneath it. When she cleared the port side she angled up, still stroking powerfully, extending the distance between her and the yacht until finally, lungs urging her to inhale, legs and arms burning with fatigue, she surfaced using a powerful backstroke fifty feet inshore of the Saracen.

A quick glance in the yacht’s direction told her that al Shar had guessed her intent. He was standing at the port side rail watching her make good her escape. Kaiulani rolled over into a crawl and pulled hard for shore a thousand feet away. She didn’t bother to look to see how far she had to go. The bottom shelving up from the reef would tell her exactly where she was. All she had to do on this, her most important swim ever, was pour on the speed and hope.

On board the Saracen al Shar watched calmly as Kaiulani swam. She was going to be truly satisfying to take apart. He would spend a long time on her, looking for that spark that made her so much more of a woman than all the other cows he had sent to meet their maker.

“Go and fetch our guest,” Al Shar said to Ibrahim and Safwan. They disappeared aft and al Shar resumed watching Kaiulani, thinking of the blissful nights he would have with her on the long passage to Kuala Lumpur. He left the rail and went below to get dressed. After breakfast he was going to make a few calls. The first was to Darjeeling, India, to an operative they had in that city, telling him to make preparations for a kidnapping. The second was to Mr. Daniel Braddock, inquiring as to the availability of the note on the construction loan for Manta Ray Submarines. Both calls would serve to let Mr. Rhysing know that the noose was tightening and that he was dealing with someone who could not be trifled with.

As al Shar entered his stateroom, two jet skis were lowered into the water at the stern of the Saracen and dispatched after Kaiulani. She had covered more than six hundred feet before they came abreast of her just outside of the boat moorings. Kai dove once and swam as far as she could, but they were on her when she surfaced. One of the riders managed to land a glancing blow to her head with a leather cosh and Kaiulani was knocked senseless. Her inert body was easily hoisted over the gas tank of one of the nimble craft and less than a minute later she was once more aboard the Saracen.

On the bridge of the yacht the captain observed the rundown and interception of Kaiulani with relief. He secretly pitied the poor girl, but was immensely glad that they had been able to recapture her. Her life was effectively over now; she just didn’t know it yet. He had scanned the beach with binoculars during the two minutes it took to retrieve her and saw no one who might have seen what transpired. He set the binoculars down and went aft to personally supervise the transfer of the girl to the hose room. As he walked the length of the vessel the sun rose and bathed the Saracen in warm golden light.

8 comments:

  1. Aww, man I was pulling for her to escape :( I'm scared to read forward, but would have if it were there...

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  2. Kaiulani is warm sunshine and cold steel. She isn't saved by our hero, she saves him. (Oops. No tales out of school.) But,yeah, Madison, she's back in al Shar's clutches again. They say you have to put your characters through hell before you save them... I'm working on it.

    Thanks for reading, Madison. (Now, where's yours?)(Don't complain, after all, you started it.)

    Aloha,

    Doug

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  3. Oh no! I wanted her to escape.

    This is a really awesome story, so full of tension and action. I can't wait to see more!

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  4. Too many other dragons to wrangle this week, Doug, so I won't have one. My creative-brain is frozen at the moment and will take a little while to defrost...but a thaw is just over the horizon.

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  5. Better and better! This is a great story you're building. Tense and well-timed. The last sentence about the warm golden light is genius. There is nothing warm or golden about this bunch of rotters.

    As always, super job!

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  6. Dearest Lisa, Madison and Kady,

    Thanks again for reading. Already deciding what to post next. May your days between now and next Tuesday be slow during the happy times and fast as hell during all else.

    Aloha,

    Doug

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  7. *seriously hopes she kicks his a##*

    Talk about upping the stakes!

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  8. KD,

    You are sooooo my heroine for coming through and commenting on this little chapter. Thank you.

    Kaiulani is down but not out. She has a huge part to play when things get darkest.

    Watching for you on Tuesday!

    Aloha,

    Doug

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